"Squishy, passive terms are hard to demonstrably fail at, but they don’t inspire anyone either."
Looking Up, 4/29/10
"We appreciated having an editor who is willing to wrestle with the sentences to make them work!"
Editing client
"When I leave for a walk
I shrink with every turn
of the staircase
until I am merely as big as the city."
"I Take a Walk in Order to Shrink"